童話故事

[紅仔]

Shiba 發表於 2014-6-8 18:31
咁我蠢囉
其實…我無乜童真…下次都係寫返咸故算喇

[Shiba]

紅仔 發表於 2014-6-8 15:25
邊part唔明先…
寫到好白架喇
咁我蠢囉

[crazy_s_monkey]

紅仔 發表於 2014-6-8 14:25
應該係一隻
係喎
用錯左添

[紅仔]

Shiba 發表於 2014-6-8 14:52
唔明呀
邊part唔明先…
寫到好白架喇

[Shiba]

紅仔 發表於 2014-6-8 14:25
睇唔明…？
唔明呀

[QueenB]

紅仔 發表於 2014-6-8 14:27
thanks teacher,
i am working very hard
Write an interesting fairy tale for us

[紅仔]

dada 發表於 2014-6-8 14:32
我下次唔會再信果d,  "不如入房傾下計lor"
大灰狼知道左呢招開始俾人廣泛利用，
開始籌備緊新招架喇

[dada]

紅仔 發表於 2014-6-8 14:30
好奸咩？都唔係好奸0者
我下次唔會再信果d,  "不如入房傾下計lor"

[紅仔]

dada 發表於 2014-6-8 14:28
隻大灰狼真係好奸架其實
好奸咩？都唔係好奸0者

[dada]

隻大灰狼真係好奸架其實

[紅仔]

QueenB 發表於 2014-6-8 03:31
I liked your story
Keep going ar
thanks teacher,
i am working very hard

[紅仔]

C.C. 發表於 2014-6-8 03:07
我等⋯續
希望cc唔駛等好耐啦，
我仲努力緊個續集

[紅仔]

crazy_s_monkey 發表於 2014-6-8 02:53
好一個大灰狼
應該係一隻

[紅仔]

Shiba 發表於 2014-6-8 10:09
好迷呀
睇唔明…？

[asd]

好故，好故事~~~

等待中.....

[QueenB]

Gimme the juicy details

[QueenB]

I liked your story
Keep going ar